i did my essay but i didn’t get good scour for it
i will include my original BAD essay
and the 2 article i used as a source are linked ( 1 https://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/201…
and the essay formate
and the teacher notes
please follow the notes
please note to follow these steps
Step 1:In order to receive a new score, students must make significant improvements to the original graded draft and track these improvements. For example, additions to the draft should be underlined, whereas omissions to the draft should include a strikethrough. Step 2: must include a brief explanation in the submission comment describing what was revised and why.